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Dust and Ash

Dust & Ash Meteors falling from the sky like stars sparkling in the night. The volcano’s dust forms below Iceland’s clouds. Life stops. Pilots stand. Air traffic is discontent, as the volatile atmosphere erupts. Through the blocking of the sun, volcanic ash plumes. The earth will be cool for a year or two. A washout will come. Iceland’s dust and ash – gone. __________________________/ *About This Poem: Volcanic ash plume from Cleveland Volcano, located on Chuginadak Island in the Aleutian Island Chain off Alaska. NASA image taken by Jeff Williams, Flight Engineer, from the International Space Station. Please view @ http://geology.com/articles/volcanic-ash.shtml. __________________________/ Sponsor: nette onclaud Contest Name: A NIGHT SKY User Name: Verlena S. Walker Nom De Plume: Oblivion Dark Sunshine Date of Entry: March 20, 2014 Date Written: March 20, 2014 ________________________________| The Saddest Landscape (POEM)Contest Sponsor: SKAT A User Name: Verlena S. Walker Nom De Plume: Oblivion Dark Sunshine Date of Entry: March 22, 2014 Date Written: March 20, 2014

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Date: 7/1/2014 1:07:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/1/2014 1:57:00 PM
Thanks David for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Date: 5/6/2014 9:56:00 PM
I should have looked at other comments, for I missed the fact you won a contest. My hardiest Applause to you GB
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Date: 5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM
Thanks a lot Gene... Verlena
Date: 5/6/2014 9:51:00 PM
Unique construction. Excitement composed with so few words...the hardest to achieve and you do so with talent and aplomb. I enjoyed this, Verlena. YF (from Ms) Gene Bourne.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/6/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thanks Gene for the supportive remarks and visiting my page on the Soup... Please come back soon. Verlena
Date: 4/10/2014 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/10/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Joseph. Verlena
Date: 4/9/2014 10:00:00 PM
SOUP MAIL
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/9/2014 11:59:00 PM
I follow your advice... SOUP MAIL... Verlena
Date: 4/9/2014 9:59:00 PM
VERLENA, , CONGRATULATIONS....SKAT
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/9/2014 11:59:00 PM
Thanks Skat... Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 5:46:00 PM
Verlena, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/2/2014 6:14:00 PM
Thanks Linda... Verlena
Date: 4/2/2014 12:22:00 AM
VERLENA, :) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/2/2014 12:58:00 AM
Thanks Skat... Verlena
Date: 4/1/2014 2:22:00 PM
dramatic, explosive scene with a different view from the sky's dome, verlena.. a well deserved win in my contest with huggs!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/1/2014 3:05:00 PM
Thanks Nette. Verlena
Date: 4/1/2014 4:49:00 AM
Hi Verlena, Congrats on your placement. I well remember the ash cloud fallout covering my car at the time. Enjoyed your creative view, from a pilot's close-up advantage point, in your descriptive poem. Well done. Regards Theresa xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/1/2014 7:13:00 AM
Thanks Theresa... Verlena
Date: 4/1/2014 3:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: - A NIGHT SKY - Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud, Verlena ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/1/2014 7:15:00 AM
Thanks Anne. Verlena
Date: 4/1/2014 1:08:00 AM
Enjoyed the write creating a nice picture and congrats on the win, verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/1/2014 1:26:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
Date: 3/22/2014 2:55:00 PM
wow, so this is a recent thing? Reminds me of the movie I saw last night about Pompeii and its destruction by a volcano. That would have made a great poem for saddest landscape as well!!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/22/2014 2:58:00 PM
Thanks Andrea... What was the title of this movie? Verlena
Date: 3/22/2014 10:28:00 AM
Wonderful and STARRY write , Verlena ... Enjoyed stopping by reading this lovely poem of yours ! :) Thanks for stopping by my page ... Love , Saanvi :))
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/22/2014 10:31:00 AM
Thanks for your support Saanvi... Verlena
Date: 3/22/2014 7:29:00 AM
Dear Verlana - Wow, you bring me right into the scene. I love "life stops pilots stand" Four short words show the broader picture. Nature humbles us all. love, Kathy
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/22/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thanks Kathy... Verlena
Date: 3/21/2014 2:28:00 PM
Remember it well Verlena. Very well written and thought out poem. Best of luck in the contest. And thank you for your kind comment. Take care.
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/21/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thanks for your support Vincent... Verlena
Date: 3/21/2014 9:44:00 AM
Verlena, this is a beautiful and wonderfully written poem, I am sure it is a winner in the contest,
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/21/2014 9:53:00 AM
Thanks for your support Broken Wings... Verlena
Date: 3/21/2014 7:59:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Clever idea upon which to write you great contest entry..Thanks for the visit with congrats..Sara
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/21/2014 9:15:00 AM
Thanks for the support Sara... Verlena
Date: 3/21/2014 7:52:00 AM
The Volcanic ash is a reminder of Nature that we should not destroy the Nature to such an extent that it's anger bursts in the form of volcanic disaster. You have beautifully created the image of Volcanic eruption. My good wishes for your contest entry my new friend and thank you once again for your kind words on my Mulberry & Summerdays Poems. Love and best wishes..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/21/2014 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Ravindran.... Verlena
Date: 3/21/2014 6:06:00 AM
A brilliant write my dear friend Verlena. I enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. TYSM for sharing and good luck in the contest. Biggest hugs! love lots, Leonora
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/21/2014 9:13:00 AM
Thanks Leonora... Verlena
Date: 3/21/2014 4:37:00 AM
Awesome and astounding write. I was sucked in from the first line...Going to my favs...
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 3/21/2014 9:12:00 AM
Thanks Tim... Verlena

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