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Dusky Dale

Painted with magical hues That glistening lake Reflecting embellished sky Time to take a break Waiting for night’s veil Chirping birds racing to perch In my dusky dale Irfana Ali bhat Contest: Wonder of dusk in Seguidilla 29/09/2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/16/2013 2:17:00 PM

what a lovely picture. A dale is a word not too common to non english. I like how you used that word!

Kash Poet

Date: 10/9/2012 12:20:00 PM

Congrats Irfana on your win in the contest!Beautiful verse!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/9/2012 7:05:00 AM

Congrats on your pretty poem being a winner. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2012 5:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Irfana. Love, Carol

Irfana Ali Bhat
Date: 10/9/2012 6:41:00 AM

thanks Carol..:)))

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/29/2012 2:39:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Must be a contest requirement for I am reading many of these..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 9/29/2012 2:25:00 PM

FANTASTIC!!!!