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Dusky Autumn

On the offshore of Atlantic ocean, - On the offshore of Atlantic ocean, Walking on the bridge of hurricane,Intensifying force of wind hit my soul. Empty streets with no one around,Paving away the roads of silly love. Turning skies into grey, We both freaking near the bay, Freezing rain drizzled away, Snow rain sizzled with a hope of ray! Ohhhh my god,It's damn awesome! Abundance of Lush green meadows was the season's feather. Into the red,yellow,purple,brown,The transition of leaves,Echoed the sense of melancholic reflection. Showering and Turning my dark days into bright, Its time to bloom with an early sunrise. Bizarre cloud,dusty storm, Love spouted between the two egoed rabbits. Bursting the introvert feelings,cherishing the moments together at the street's of luxe ville. Left an Autumn of love in our heart! Light sun curvature reflecting against my eyes, Awned wheatgrass,cold wind wrapping us,moving into the world of fantasy. Beating down, The rhythm and blues, shaking the jazz with a sip of jigger! Mild night temperature with deep brown coffee, Amorously advancing towards romance, Nature taking the baby steps,dissolving in the essence of season,Gladly applauding Your arrival ,warmly welcoming an Autumn!

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Date: 12/28/2014 11:37:00 PM
a passionate write. I bet it could have placed higher if it were kept at the seven line limit! Congrats on the winners' list.
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/3/2015 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for your kind appreciation..thanks a ton dear.. @@Madhavi
Date: 12/28/2014 11:52:00 AM
Good thinking Madhavi,congrats on the win...huggs
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/3/2015 12:44:00 AM
Thanks Kayods for your kind appreciation.. @@mads
Date: 12/28/2014 11:10:00 AM
very creative write - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/3/2015 12:45:00 AM
Thanks JAN for your kind appreciation!! @@mads
Date: 12/28/2014 10:18:00 AM
Madhavi, Congratulations, on your win. Many enjoyable Autumn poem. Stop by my latest blog "Autumn's Gown" if you'd like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 3/3/2015 12:46:00 AM
Thanks PD, for your kind appreciation!! @@mads
Date: 9/10/2014 12:05:00 PM
welcoming an Autumn with deep brown coffee ? Huh? Dusky, really. Loved your lines like "Showering and Turning my dark days into bright, Its time to bloom with an early sunrise"or "The rhythm and blues, shaking the jazz with a sip of jigger!" or "Love spouted between the two egoed rabbits".Your words jig, your colors spread out to welcome Autumn. Extremely good image. Thank you. Love.
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Madhavi Sp
Date: 9/12/2014 5:18:00 AM
Thanks Rajat,It means a lot,thanks for sharing your time and appreciating my lines!! @mads

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