Dusk Rose

New beginnings seep, twilight etches skylines chilled.. Receding montages fade into blue distilled licked by comet's tails caressed by the milky way, a balm for what ails Poet: Debbie Guzzi Contest:WONDER OF DUSK IN SEGUIDILLA 10/1/2012

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Kash Poet

Date: 10/9/2012 12:02:00 PM

You have painted a beautiful picture here Debi.Congrats on the win.

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/9/2012 7:29:00 AM

Congrats friend Debbie on your win...very nice poem. cheers!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/9/2012 7:01:00 AM

Sigh..lovely...congrats. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/9/2012 5:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 10/9/2012 3:03:00 AM

what imagery!!! congratulations on ur win...:))

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/2/2012 10:29:00 AM

your poems sure inspire one Debbie... so poetic, so profound....

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2012 6:41:00 AM

Easy to read easy to love your little poem Debbie. Wish you good luck in contest!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/1/2012 9:42:00 PM

SIMPLY ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL CANVAS OF WORDS DEBBIE LUV .. AMAZING VIEW SURE TO CAPTURE NETTE'S EYE .. WINNING WISHES .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY BIG WIN .. HOPE U HAD A GREAT BIRTHDAY .. WE R BPTIZING LITTLE GUY THIS SUNDAY WITH BIG PARTY AT OUR HOME AFTER .. CHILLY HERE NOW SO A FIREPLACE MOMENT IF COOL THIS WEEKEND .. NEW LIFE IS SO MAGICAL ..

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/1/2012 4:13:00 PM

What a delightful and charming write my friend! I really enjoyed this harmonious and wondrous poem Debbie! Just to let you know, Nette requested that you submit the Form to be Rhyme, just thought you should know in case Nette takes off for that! You've done magnificently with this piece, Great Work!!

Ann Roske

Date: 10/1/2012 3:17:00 PM

a beautiful picture of day's end - enjoyed this write.