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The form of this poem was inspired by a very insightful comment left to me on my poem "Tragedy in Black" by Frank Blacharczyk

If you see this, thanks Frank.

Dusk from Dawn, the sun blinks as clouds whisper soft hues of color, kissing the dark sky with ever changing silhouettes purple, yellow and red shadows distant in blue skies kissed by gold lips,
Dawn from Dusk, the circle of life remains
distant in blue skies kissed by gold lips, purple, yellow and red shadows ever changing silhouettes kissing the dark sky with soft hues of color, as clouds whisper the sun blinks from Dawn, Dusk 08/23/15

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Date: 9/1/2015 11:46:00 AM
Again, amazing talent ... CayCay
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James Inman
Date: 9/1/2015 12:11:00 PM
Beautiful comment, CayCay, thank you
Date: 8/28/2015 4:53:00 PM
oh and I can't recall if i have faved you as a poet. Will check and see about that too!
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James Inman
Date: 8/28/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. You have long been a favorite of mine. Looking forward to seeing the form. Even before I started posting here.
Date: 8/28/2015 4:52:00 PM
I see that my friend Jan was already here with multiple WOWOWOWOW's. I can see why. This is so awesome! OK, now I have to challenge you to do a certain type of etheree that is really going to challenge you. but it will end up like this one, a tiny masterpiece. Let me go find this one form that someone challenged me to do, and I will forward you the link so you can see how I did it!! Again, I loved this etheree of yours. One time a judge made us do this kind of backwards writing, but not etheree!
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Date: 8/28/2015 4:52:00 PM
I shall fave this one too!!
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Date: 8/24/2015 5:15:00 PM
WOW WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! AWESOME JAMES INTO FAVES THIS IS FABULOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS:-) HUGS jAN XX
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James Inman
Date: 8/24/2015 6:19:00 PM
What a comment! I'll assume you like It. Thank you Jan!

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