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During the Last Minutes

During the last minutes Time came by, it won’t be the first time he does this he did this when he was about eight years ago and he really loved it to that point that he became addicted to that point that he becomes dedicated, he would put all his time on this, his parents tried to warn him but did he listen? To him it was more fun than many things he has came across, it almost made him a mess, he became interested in this and bear in mind that he would even get arrested for his interests as if he cares. His friends named him for his curiosity, he spent much time in his room locking it that no one comes in and find him in progress, he would be busy with magazines and watching videos online, one day he became a star, it was the two of them only, eyeing at each other. He made sure that it is hard, hard enough that it will go in very deep and come out again, they both touched it to suite them both, he closed his eyes and went back, he came forward very slowly, he came at the snail’s pace touched it very slowly like a person with experience in this field, yes you could tell from their eyes that they are ready hr bended down to it, up and down he went to tight them up again, it was as quite that no one was there but only the two of them, both smiled at one another and went for it he hit with his last breathstamina while his eyes left closed. oh sound came from nowhere, hr did it, he scored the only last penalty that many thought not, he proved his parent wrong, oh what a joy to his supporters, on the other hand a disgrace from the keeper, during the only last minutes he did it. During the last minutes,

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Date: 1/19/2016 7:07:00 PM
:)SKAT
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Date: 5/30/2015 12:27:00 AM
Great write, EXX Pablo. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Have fun. Regards, Viv
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Date: 5/28/2015 2:20:00 PM
- Hello new member: Paballo - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poem here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you good luck. - (Give and receive comments) - / / Anne-Lise :)
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Exx Pablo
Date: 5/29/2015 4:03:00 AM
oh thanks Anne-lise for a warm welcome like this i just ddn't know what to expect
Date: 5/28/2015 1:59:00 PM
back for a second read. its even better the second time around
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Exx Pablo
Date: 5/29/2015 4:05:00 AM
i want to belive that,doing for the first time is like you dont know what to do and what others may expect
Date: 5/28/2015 12:18:00 PM
Paballo, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Exx Pablo
Date: 5/29/2015 4:06:00 AM
oh SKAT i would realy enjoy such wonderful time with you starting from now
Date: 5/28/2015 11:47:00 AM
Paballo, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Exx Pablo
Date: 5/29/2015 4:07:00 AM
thanks for the warm welcome LINDA #word
Date: 5/28/2015 9:37:00 AM
Thank youforsharing
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