Duplex

THE PATRIOT With pride Lonesome Lady Reached out Moist eyes Spoke out Her love Boundless Selfless Poured out Applause Broke out Clutching Award In hand For son Martyred Battling For his Homeland Date 6Dec2016 Duplex contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/11/2016 7:40:00 PM

this is a heartbreaking thing. Congrats on your win . YOu did as Jan asked and delivered a sad one.

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 12/11/2016 7:46:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Darren White

Date: 12/11/2016 12:21:00 AM

Only now I see your poem. A painful memory about a war... Congfratulations!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 12/11/2016 12:41:00 AM

Thank you!

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 12/11/2016 12:33:00 AM

Thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2016 7:21:00 PM

I was chocked up reading your emotional poem Sushma I'm surprised no one else had commented before I did:-( Many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx

Sushma A. Singh
Date: 12/10/2016 7:37:00 PM

Thanks a lot, Jan for the warm appreciation!