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Duplex

Villain Caged in boxed-in in love with a villain Handcuff to evil nowhere to run away Turned light to dim fond of stealing peace; joy Closed hand bruised face regret repeat please stop Thoughts of slaying villain escape bondage

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Alexis Y.

Date: 12/11/2016 4:49:00 AM

Hi Patrice, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/11/2016 9:12:00 AM

Thank you Alexis... God bless

Darren White

Date: 12/11/2016 12:20:00 AM

Coming back to you with congratulations!

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/11/2016 3:51:00 AM

Thank you Darren... God bless...

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2016 7:16:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Patrice:-) I found your imagery quite chilling in this sad poem:-( hugs Jan xx

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/10/2016 8:31:00 PM

Thank you Jan I really appreciate your response and honesty... God bless

Darren White

Date: 12/8/2016 1:08:00 PM

Owww, that is recognizable, caged without a cage, painful strong poem.... Good luck in the contest

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/8/2016 1:46:00 PM

Thank you Darren White I really appreciate your feed back...

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/8/2016 9:23:00 AM

A nice Duplex ... best wishes ...

Patrice Trice Jackson
Date: 12/8/2016 9:46:00 AM

Thank you Probir... God bless