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Duplex

Heartbeat A pulse of peo- ple moves through the streets to hide from the time that runs after us all on and on and onward and on and on again to fol- low dreams we have throughout the day behind our dis- tant gaze on and on and forward and on and on 'til then at night we sleep away with dreams the time unspent until our last short breath is gone and on and on towards the light that leads us to sweet ne- ver more December 6, 2016 Contest: Duplex Sponsored by Jan Allison

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Date: 12/11/2016 5:51:00 AM
Hi Jeff, Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2016 12:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement :)
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Date: 12/10/2016 7:39:00 PM
I awarded you a third place Jeff as you split words such a people, follow and never and it meant the poem didn't flow well and make perfect sense. Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:43:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback and the placement in your contest, Jan. That was a great idea as a contest and a fun write.

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