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Dueling Would Be Violins

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Dueling Would Be Violins

The vegetable orchestra was about to play Fred and Ted had to have their way Both the same, stubborn twins These two dueling string bean violins “I’m the lead violin” said Fred “No you’re not” said violin Ted “My strings are taught and so fine” “So what” said Fred, "so are mine" “And you’re warped in the middle” “Get lost” said Ted, “You’re just a second hand fiddle” “I'm as good as a Stradivari, don’t you know?, And I have the finest bow” “That doesn’t matter, you’re still a buffoon, Oh, and you’re always out of tune” “Look I’m lead violin, I won’t be thwarted” An angry Fred String bean, retorted The argument went on, it never diminished Until the concert was over and finished So who won?, that’s another story Roger the roobarb stole all the glory
For contest 'Show Me The Funny'

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  1. Date: 6/21/2013 10:37:00 AM
    cleverly creative and worthy of praise... Congrats on your win..... Jake

  1. Date: 6/19/2013 9:44:00 AM
    Hello Gary, ~CONGRATULATIONS~ always & forever * LINDA

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  1. Date: 6/15/2013 3:42:00 PM
    Hilarious love it got to be a fav Shadow x

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:17:00 PM
    Gary, this is a cute write for kids! Your use of animated vegetables reminds me of Veggie Tales. I enjoyed. Love, Kim

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    Date: 6/15/2013 12:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Kim, your kind words are appreciated :)