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The sun was setting, as it usually does The town a ghost town, the main street all but silenced The wind blowing leaves and dreams to and fro The tension in the air was palpable The few souls about all peering out shuttered windows When in from the west, came a storm Her name was Serena Storm, They shivered in her wake, the poetess of dead lovers Then over to the east side, riding in slow and steady The grim reaper or so it seemed, hollowed eyes Dead soul and dark mind, his side arm at the ready The greatest duel in history, right here In the town of Nowhere The setting sun reflected of her dark long coat The last tear drop, falling to its death in the dust She stared ahead, face blank Daring, with a glare, shoot me, shoot me, try He dismounted his horse, called Heartless Soul His eyes slits, staring down the curvaceous storm pacing untoward His hand inside his coat, slowly pulling out a mickey He belted down a shot or three, In the town of nowhere They both paced, hands at their side Closer and closer, the saloon keeper Not quite sure his bottle would be paid in full Then as quickly at the sun set…… Vaso drew first. The finest long black quill one ever saw His other hand dropped his bottle Magically a writing pad appeared Serena drew second, pen at her side The color of blood, and for good reason She too tablet in hand, putting ink to paper As they both furiously wrote In the town of Nowhere Hearts were murdered The meaning of life was hanged not long after Love was beheaded The main street a river of blood A storm of tears washing away crimson desires An empty vassal, Vaso’s insides already dead Dropping his pen, he pulled out his sword of mourning The duel to end, as he lopped off his own head She dropped paper and pen to the ground She faced down the grim reaper, and it’s he who is dead The only one to know, his name was Arthur King of the dark, ruler of lost dreams In the town of Nowhere The poetic duel of the century Both won and lost Long ago

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Date: 9/13/2015 8:13:00 AM
Truly great piece of writing, very well written. Your a very talented and creative writer. Please feel free to share your ideas and work on my Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=bookmarks Many thanks!
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Date: 1/26/2015 11:23:00 PM
Stopping back to raise a glass in your honor...come visit Thursday night as we toast a good friend who has beaten pancreatic cancer... Hopefully with a Blackhawks victory...cheers
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Tim, and thats great news, nice to hear some good news for a change!
Date: 1/26/2015 9:24:00 PM
Tremendously well written. Congrats your win on poem of the day.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thank you Marilyn, much appreciated!
Date: 1/26/2015 6:21:00 PM
I'm amazed at your creative writing, Arthur, The Poetic Duel of the Century" Bravo a 7 ++ higher if I could. Congratulations on the Poem of the Day. Blessings and hugs dear friend Eve
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thank you so much Eve!!!!
Date: 1/26/2015 4:14:00 PM
Congratulations Arthur on Poem of the Day!! You are really rockin' with the writin' -- Outstanding!! Best Always, Gary
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 9:03:00 PM
Thank you Gary! Cheers
Date: 1/26/2015 1:18:00 PM
Wow!! Very spirited. Love it!! Congrats! Feel free to share it on this page also! https://www.facebook.com/poetchroniclesleague
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Date: 1/26/2015 1:00:00 PM
Hey you!!! Show off! ;) Poem of the day AND week!!! Way to go...You are the fastest quill in the west, buddy. Hugs to you and lots of congrats.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 8:44:00 PM
I admit Eileen, I was tickled pink about that!!!!! Thanks!
Date: 1/26/2015 12:38:00 PM
very beautifully painted arthur congratulations on poem of the day pal
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 8:43:00 PM
Thank you liam
Date: 1/26/2015 10:12:00 AM
This legend of ink and blood will be told to generations to come . . . how the soul was pierced by words sharp and deadly . . . yes, words do kill. Love this poem . . . it has a EA Poe feeling. Outstanding dear friend. 7
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/30/2015 8:42:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 1/26/2015 9:37:00 AM
An interesting story with layers of meaning. Congratulations on your piece being chosen poem of the day.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2015 9:46:00 PM
Thank you Maurice my fellow Canadian, I hope all is going well for you! Cheers!
Date: 1/26/2015 8:57:00 AM
I'm cheering for you, Arthur! Poem of the week and poem of the day...way to go!! Big congrats...hugs, Rhonda
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2015 9:45:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda, I have to confess, I am tickled pink about it!!! Thanks so much
Date: 1/26/2015 7:41:00 AM
Hey Arthur, very cool poem of the day! This is truly a masterpiece! Love it! 7!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/26/2015 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Richard! You are as always too kind.
Date: 1/25/2015 8:10:00 PM
BOOM a one shot wonder Arthur, you've won this battle all quill pens down, my paper lies blank, for no inspirational work can beat this work, you caught me by surprise but I loved every minute of it completely great job my friend, keep these coming, cheri
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:36:00 PM
Thank you Cherl, and yes I have been called a one shot wonder before! LOL Not sure that was good thing
Date: 1/25/2015 12:23:00 PM
Awesome Arthur! You managed to keep my attention from beginning to end. Love your golden pen, even if it drips blood. #7 // paul
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Paul, much appreciated!!
Date: 1/25/2015 11:14:00 AM
Wow...an awesome write and duel to the finish. Losing your head is a small price to pay for your artistry! Have a blessed day...hugs, Rhonda
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:35:00 PM
Well I was using poetic license I sure hope I still have my head!!!! Thanks for your kind words Rhonda, I may ask you for some help later! :)
Date: 1/25/2015 9:10:00 AM
I just love this. Its freakin awesome! I love how you put yourself in it literally! The whole theme is a great idea. The pictures help bring in the reader! Lol Arthur king of the dark. Really cool. Hey I was listening to "Centuries"by Fall out boy. Check it out. I'm stuck on it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:33:00 PM
Thanks Meg and yes I will go listen!!!!
Date: 1/25/2015 7:21:00 AM
OMG this was amazing! I love your stories always, and this one, dang this one was awesome.!. bravo!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:33:00 PM
Oh Cas you are just so so so Sweet!!!!!! thank you
Date: 1/25/2015 7:09:00 AM
Wow Arthur, you had me at three belts....what a beautiful duel with Katei ....a7 and favorite
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:32:00 PM
After a hockey game we shall see who drinks who under the table!
Date: 1/25/2015 1:49:00 AM
What an epic write! Goodness gracious me...You just blazed with this. I'm sure Serene will LOVE IT. I thought it's quite superb. The photos...amazing. GOOD ONE, ARTHUR!! Not happy you lopped off your own head, but.....
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 1/25/2015 9:31:00 PM
thank you so much Eileen! Hugs

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