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Ducks Long For Spring Thaw

skaters slide on ice white mountains rise behind lake... ducks long for spring thaw Entry for Michael Falotico's "An Haiku from Your Window" contest by Diane Locksley

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/13/2011 5:10:00 PM

Very well done Diane . Haiku poems are so much fun to do , a lot said in so few words. Anne

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/21/2011 6:16:00 PM

Brilliant piece of imagery. You have painted a beautiful landscape on the canvas by your striking words. The last line 'ducks long for spring thaw' reveals a lot of longings and expectations for spring to come soon. Great write my friend. My good wishes for your superb contest entry. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Diane Locksley

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/6/2011 1:04:00 PM

Nice scene you have painted with equally good images, Diane

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/6/2011 12:31:00 PM

A very descriptive haiku. I think Mike will like this one.