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Dsp Captcha

DSP- Captcha Dejections lead into deep depression, Subtle heart sinks with each beat, Precious pearls of tears roll . Acrostic in syllables of a kimo - 10/7/6 Written April 19th, 2015 For "Captcha contest" by Judy Konos Awarded first place win

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Skat A

Date: 4/30/2015 6:14:00 PM

Nice win Dr Upma. Forever ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/29/2015 5:16:00 PM

aww hugs. this is sad but beautiful, precious pearls of tears roll, what a great ending line. grats on your win.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/28/2015 7:45:00 PM

Beautifully written, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2015 5:50:00 PM

so nice how you described that tear! Congrats on your win.,

Jan Allison

Date: 4/28/2015 3:52:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs

Date: 4/28/2015 2:27:00 PM

Congrats Doc :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/28/2015 1:47:00 PM

last line is awesome and you know it!!! congrats PD

Judy Konos

Date: 4/28/2015 11:51:00 AM

Thank you for entering my contest.

Tammy Reams

Date: 4/19/2015 9:13:00 AM

I really like this! I love the image of pearls and tears. Good luck in the contest. A winner from me.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/19/2015 8:34:00 AM

deep sad write with great imagery and alliteration - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx