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Dry Thoughts

shivering thoughts fear of a possible outcome triggering my mind coupled with anger nothing separating the two thoughts living in my mind like a spear piercing through my soul its all about the future phobia of negative possibility

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/24/2013 4:34:00 AM
Admire, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Date: 10/2/2013 12:57:00 PM
Hie Admire, hope you're fine there. What a poem. Fear is something we must fear, so they say- easier said than done. Although we must face fear, to know that it's a fearsome predator makes us face it with courage and confidence-without fear. JM (KADOMA)
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Date: 9/22/2013 4:39:00 AM
What a lovely sonnet! The fear of failure and regret can drive us insane sometimes...love how you handled these themes. Thanks for stopping by my work...And its nice to see a fellow zimbo on PS lol will lookout for more of your work ^_^ Y.L.N
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