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Dry Bath

Mosquitos sucking blood Water thick with larvae West Nile virus

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/19/2012 7:25:00 AM

Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Doris. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/25/2012 7:24:00 AM

Soup mail..Mom

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/20/2012 8:39:00 PM

deadly!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/18/2012 4:23:00 PM

scary Doris, yet wonderful!!!

Jack Horne

Date: 9/18/2012 9:14:00 AM

yes, I've heard about that nasty virus - scary write indeed, Doris - and congrats on all your wins : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2012 7:57:00 AM

I hope that we don't have that here..Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara

Len Gasun

Date: 9/17/2012 8:10:00 PM

great haiku my dear friend!!! i love it. Thanks for stopping by and taking time to read my work. have a nice and grace-filled day always!!! hugs:) leonora

Chipepo Lwele

Date: 9/17/2012 12:07:00 AM

Fabulous write.Enjoyed 'dry bath'.