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Drunks

Drunks Stay in Funks No longer look like Hunks Use Sidewalks for Bunks Get beaten up by Punks And though they have Lost it All They'll be in the Bodega Tomorrow Looking for some Alcohol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/19/2012 7:19:00 PM
Nice write and very true!
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Date: 7/8/2012 8:36:00 PM
Donald, I just read the first 5 or 6 of the poems on your blog and got the impression of seeing you in a coffeehouse on open mike poetry night reading these poems aloud. You'd fit perfectly, and would no doubt be extremely popular. (you might want to lose many of the commas in your writing though as they're unnecessary!)
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