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Drunken Moon

lifeless phantom floats moonlit waves of white flecked foam forgotten relic By: Eve Roper 7/2/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/11/2015 1:13:00 AM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/11/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thank you dear friend hugs Eve
Date: 7/9/2015 8:47:00 AM
I love the poem and picture you chose, an excellent pairing. Pour me a glass of moon beams! Congrats on your win Eve.
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Date: 7/9/2015 9:36:00 AM
I thought yours was wonderful, I first thought of a glass of Champagne but then I changed my mind I'm glad you used it
Date: 7/9/2015 1:27:00 AM
Ah very wonderful Eve! Congrats on fine win!
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Date: 7/9/2015 9:37:00 AM
Thank you so much , Dr. Upma A. Sharma , Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2015 3:12:00 PM
Wow...this is beautiful Eve...congratulations Tim
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:12:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your warm visit and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2015 1:27:00 PM
Glad to see this lovely entry on the winners' list, Eve! congratulations! hugs // paul
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:13:00 PM
Thank you,Paul, so very much for your warm visit and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/8/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hi Eve...congrats on this profound Haiku...rgds, 7bang
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:14:00 PM
Thank you, Thabang, so very much for your warm visit, inspiring compliment, and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 11:56:00 PM
wow you did a great job with this one. Congrats to you.
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:15:00 PM
Thank you,Andrea, so very much for the congratulations. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 11:53:00 PM
Love the slightly skeletal, bleak feel to this one, Eve. Well done. Viv x
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Viv, for your inspiring complement, and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 11:44:00 PM
Hi eve loved your drunken moon congrats!
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:16:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Lee, for your inspiring complement, and congratulations. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/7/2015 11:05:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
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Date: 7/4/2015 2:43:00 PM
You skillfully and creatively knew what to do with this theme and produced a wonderful haiku! Love it and rate it a 7! Good luck in the contest, Eve! Pandita
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Date: 7/8/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your inspiring complement, and 7. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/3/2015 5:43:00 PM
Love this haiku, Eve. Beautiful imagery in the first two lines; an impressive concluding line. hugs // paul
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/3/2015 6:50:00 PM
Paul, thank you for your wonderful support. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/3/2015 3:17:00 AM
Eve catchy first line, wishes of luck for the contest!=) ~Olive ELoisa
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/3/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, Olive, for your support and luck. Hugs Eve
Date: 7/3/2015 2:58:00 AM
Nice poem Eve. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 7/3/2015 6:47:00 PM
Thank you,Linda , for your inspiring words of encouragement. Hugs dear friend Eve
Date: 7/3/2015 2:50:00 AM
Nice!! All the best in the contest Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/3/2015 6:47:00 PM
Thank you,Njeri, for your support and kind words. Hugs Eve

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