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Drunken Moon

a smoldering lust behind smoke of drifting clouds shamelessly flirting John G. Lawless 7/2/2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:09:00 AM

John, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 7:00:00 AM

I like your flirty moon. Well done!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:14:00 AM

Wonderful drunken moon haiku John! Congrats on big win!

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 11:08:00 AM

Back with congratulations, John! All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:48:00 PM

This one is among my top four favorites so far. Congrats on the winner list, John.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:44:00 PM

This is great, John, well done. Regards, Viv

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:30:00 PM

This one still my favorite : ) congrats!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:01:00 PM

John, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2015 11:38:00 PM

oh gosh, HERE is your drunken moon poem for the contest. This is THE BEST of all I have seen of yours this week.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/5/2015 2:40:00 PM

Love-drunk...Flirting behind a smoke screen! #7 // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 5:46:00 PM

I will have a pleasant and wonderful 4th :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/3/2015 3:13:00 AM

John, i love your last line! imagery is awesome~Olive Eloisa =)

John Lawless
Date: 7/3/2015 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Olive, I toyed with this theme a bit and will post the others.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 3:02:00 AM

John enjoyed the imagery is pushing right through the fog. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

John Lawless
Date: 7/3/2015 9:06:00 AM

Thanks Linda, hope you have a pleasant and peaceful fourth

Lee Carter

Date: 7/3/2015 1:08:00 AM

Love this !

John Lawless
Date: 7/3/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by Lee have a safe and happy fourth

David Mohn

Date: 7/2/2015 11:03:00 PM

This is stellar John...sure to place high

John Lawless
Date: 7/3/2015 9:05:00 AM

Thanks David, I had some fun writing a few on this theme.