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Drunken By the Moon

Drinking all your beauty Crazed under your influence Intoxicating moonshine *Not for the contest, just inspired by it.

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Md Johnson

Date: 2/13/2023 6:40:00 AM

Another one thoroughly enjoyed. I'll definitely be reading more of your poems. -MDJ

Red Barchettadrive

Date: 11/9/2015 12:52:00 AM

Loving me some lunar poetics! This is awesome Kelly!

Red Barchettadrive
Date: 11/20/2015 11:09:00 PM

I believe the last 10 or so of my poems are astrologically inspired. I must be a moon-a-tic!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 11/20/2015 11:04:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments... So many of us use the moon for inspiration and I am so glad that we do. I love reading lunar poems, too :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/28/2015 1:52:00 PM

Your words are soft and mysterious, full of life and magic. Emile

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/3/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting so kindly, Emile!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/17/2015 9:50:00 PM

oh my GOSH, how did I never see this beauty. I really love it!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/23/2015 1:41:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I'm happy that you liked this one. It was a fun poem to write :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/6/2015 5:09:00 AM

A really wonderful haiku Kelly. I loved it!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/9/2015 10:01:00 PM

I'm so glad you did, Connie! Thank you very much for your nice comments :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/5/2015 4:06:00 AM

Very clever and creative, Kelly. A different kind of tipsiness! #7 hugs // paul

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/7/2015 11:44:00 PM

Yes, the moonlight can easily make me swoon!... I appreciate your nice comments and the 7 rating, Paul. Thank you!... Hugs :)

Daver Austin

Date: 7/4/2015 1:08:00 PM

Good one. The man in the moon is staggering. Love, daver

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/7/2015 11:17:00 PM

Yes, he is!... Thank you for the nice comments, Daver. I appreciate it :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/4/2015 6:48:00 AM

well sketched, kelly.. i like every line here.. huggs!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/7/2015 10:53:00 PM

Thank you, Nette. I had fun writing this one!... Hugs :)

Skat A

Date: 7/3/2015 7:05:00 PM

Nice oe Kelly. Have a safe and Happy 4th of July.... ... Love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 5:56:00 PM

Love that this was inspired by the contest.. :)@-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/3/2015 3:17:00 PM

- Beautiful haiku, Kelly! (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/5/2015 10:32:00 PM

I haven't written many haikus, so I wanted to give it a try... Thank you for the kind comments and 7 rating, Anne-Lise. Hugs :)