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Vines, twisting, crawling, slowly thicken and ascend seeking sunlight at the top; old tree fashions crutch, tiny tendrils clutch rough bark- out of darkness into light. Someday soon I will stroll again wild forest path, purple wine stains on my lips. Copyright, July 20, 2016 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 7/22/2016 6:56:00 PM
so good to read you again, faye.. 'purple wine stains', ohh i want to wander into a forest soon... superb work!..huggs
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Date: 7/21/2016 5:51:00 PM
Love it! cheers!
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Date: 7/21/2016 4:35:00 PM
such a vivid descriptive write in 3 short stanzas - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/21/2016 4:09:00 PM
Nicely done Faye. I can see the plump grapes hanging, swaying in the breeze.
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