Drunk

Heineken crystal head vodka MD 20/20 im pretty tipsy I'm pretty drunk I'm happy I'm sad I'm happy Watchin Xmas movies. This is the worst poem ever. but then again I'm pretty drunk

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Justin Bordner

Date: 1/2/2013 5:37:00 PM

Your honesty is so good that its bubblely - I'll have a High Life for both of us - although you are adept at being mischevious Jay, the way you 'keep it real' is very respectable - J.A.B. %

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/26/2012 4:10:00 PM

worth a read Jay,,,have a wonderful New Year.

Jay Loveless
Date: 12/27/2012 8:55:00 AM

Lol well im glad you think my mess of a drunken write was worth the read (:

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

Date: 12/23/2012 5:51:00 AM

And now you have a pounding headace too :) at least thats how i feel next morning, when i have had a few, enjoyed, Happy Christmas to you love Elizabeth

Jay Loveless
Date: 12/27/2012 8:54:00 AM

Oh I did haha. I had work the next morning and no hangover and my two friends couldn't even pull themselves out of bed haha

Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 12/24/2012 4:44:00 AM

Well i hope you got the last laugh, when your friends arrived home in the early hours feeling the worse for wear, with worse headaces than you :)

Jay Loveless
Date: 12/23/2012 3:48:00 PM

Haha I forgot the Gin and juice I had too...i had a smallll headache but it went away relatively easy...i enjoy a beer just about every night and occasionally I get drunk, but yeah I had a pretty good time. Till my friends went to the strip club and left me by myself that's when I got sad. I don't like drinking alone lol