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Drums Tell the Story

The drums could be heard far away across the savannah they travelled spreading, telling the awful news of the awful deaths and suffering One village drums talking to another as much as fifty or so miles away dreadful news they told the listeners everywhere lie the dead animals Of the worst drought in living memory people dying like flies with thirst animals stuck in mud trying to reach the last remaining precious drops The last few drops of brackenish water bloated carcass's everywhere you look hopeless in people's eyes watching when will the monsoon rains arrive? The drums beat ever louder and faster but no help can they bring to sufferers only water can do that, can rejuvenate and bring some hope to this parched land Bring back life, and fresh greenery for all now the drum tone changes becomes insistent rain two hundred miles away will it reach? often it stops, but not this time Soon the rivers burst their banks flooding in what seems an instance all springs back that life saving water has rejuvenated all bringing fresh hope and life returns abundantly there are two things that Africa needs to survive rain and sun. The failure of either causes such suffering to both man and beast the other danger is floods they can wash whole roads away sometimes leaving a crater that a bus would not quite fill so then the roads remain impassable until the dry season which could be 4-5 months away Just think you turn a tap and hey presto water. Animals and people daily have to walk 20-50 miles daily just to drink

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Date: 3/10/2014 10:52:00 AM
Excellent, I love the sounds and imagery, Shadow, it is sad that the African continent switches between enough rain and drought.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 3/10/2014 11:04:00 AM
there is water underground it is being able to reach it and while fools build water towers for people and ignore the animals need for water it will continue in places it does not have to. then there is corruption on top lose, lose situation hugs
Date: 2/11/2014 6:46:00 PM
Love your facts at the end, love your drums line also it adds to the suspense of your poem well done lady read it twice. cheri
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Date: 2/12/2014 4:48:00 AM
that is how far apart villagers keep in touch Cheri when it is for war the sound is very chilling ty for reading hugs
Date: 2/9/2014 7:23:00 PM
Another well written informative poem from you Shadow....I really enjoyed it...
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/10/2014 2:59:00 PM
ty Donna hugs
Date: 2/9/2014 6:40:00 AM
This is a glorious write about problems in Africa! I really enjoyed reading this illustrious poem this morning! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/10/2014 2:56:00 PM
ty Russell sorry about slow reply have been away this weekend hugs
Date: 2/9/2014 6:18:00 AM
Good work Shadow but the major problem is government; there is water in rivers, in the land and the air in Africa, unfortunately the corrupt govt in Africa is non chalant about the welfare of the people. Yes weather problem but corruption and not weather is the bane of Africa.
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Date: 2/9/2014 6:37:00 AM
I write of nature Kayod5 I tend to stay away from politics no easy fix's there. And I dislike Water Aid as they block off water from the animals by fences and stockades(zareba's) Rivers dry up so only elephants can dig deep enough to get to it and in doing so help save life's of smaller animals yes there is water but often not where needed hugs

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