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Drowsy Moments

Clock tick I hear loud I open my mouth wide, an yawn closes his eye lids. Lunch at a party, later open book in hand, left book and mouth open. Long Travel in flight all is quiet, some shoulders have turned into pillows. TV ON with loud news, recurring sound comes from a seat, remote on floor. 3-April-2016 MYSTICS SPLIT HAIKUS - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose

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Date: 9/13/2016 1:08:00 PM
The moment of drowsiness is nicely painted, Sathya.
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Date: 4/17/2016 9:38:00 PM
Sathya, I think these haikus were great, a winner to me 7 ~
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