Get Your Premium Membership

Drowsy

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Evelyn Judy Buehler.


In the tall green grass of August I lay, And the sky was a sparkling deep blue, And the orange sun sat on a distant hill, As I drowsed in the forever of a moment! Magenta blush and red flowers over my head, Waved at the vivid birds floating above, As puffy clouds drifted slowly, far away. A yellow butterfly landed in my long hair, And fluttered away as insects hummed tunes. Time slowed to a stop in the season of sun! Written on 12/10 2020 For: IMAGIST any form Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/14/2020 3:14:00 PM
A dose of tall green grass... add in insects buzzing... throw in some summber-grade humidity and a hot sun... and you've a great recipe for drowsing, Evelyn. Enjoyed and related, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 12/13/2020 8:37:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! It speaks to me because I’m a busy life, I long for moments like that!
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/13/2020 9:00:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much. :=)
Date: 12/10/2020 11:28:00 PM
So vividly described, the type of poem I admire so much. ~~
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/11/2020 10:53:00 AM
Thant is so thrilling to know. Thank you. :)
Date: 12/10/2020 10:41:00 PM
L O V E, a Fav! Every line phrases an image in a new way to me. Elegant!
Login to Reply
Buehler Avatar
Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 12/11/2020 10:52:00 AM
Thank you. I'm so honored. I'm glad you like it, Sally.

Book: Shattered Sighs