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Sinking into the soil of his egocentric ocean Snarled and sniveled the cephalopod mollusk Since to be worthy of his charming prey Sensation beaming from his passion blasting Suspending her from being aware of drowning Stunning to sight her lapse into squandering Sloshing in intense sadness and deceitfulness
Written: April: 03, 2022

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Date: 4/6/2022 9:38:00 PM
So sad.... the drowning is complete, a drowning into the sea of his egocentric passion and the morass of sadness and deceitfulness... ! A very poignant poem !
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