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Drowning Deeply In Love

Lips touch the tip of morning with the awakening of thine eyes, accompanied by inexhaustible thoughts of only you. Drifting away from abed, thoughts trace in tandem with thy body in lost sight within the flat-bottomed vessel. Water pouring down accreting to the seductive oils forming to crystallized foam. Drowning deeply in Love. Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 08-02-2012

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 10/30/2019 8:24:00 AM

Wow another amazing piece of art right here! You haven't raised you pen up yet kind sir? Lol that's ok I guess some are intimidated hahaha! Or shy!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/2/2019 12:05:00 PM

I’m now raising my pen up thanks to a special friend!!! ;)

Cherie Thomas

Date: 6/14/2013 5:36:00 AM

Ink, oh I so love your words, they melt the heart. Just beautiful, my friend.....xx thankyou:) cherie

Caleah Buil

Date: 5/15/2013 9:53:00 AM

Amazing! It was so smooth the way it was written. Kind of how love can feel!

Sean L Sanders

Date: 2/24/2013 6:56:00 AM

Love it

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/14/2012 8:25:00 AM

You drown so gracefully with that poetic curve you created. Love how it all consolidates into those last 4 words.

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/28/2012 6:14:00 PM

Divine penning in verse and form! Cynthia (no wonder you have soooooo many followers...I'm smiling here)

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 8/16/2012 4:31:00 PM

This is very good, coming from someone who knows. But I hope you don't drown. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM

Thank you dearly Lucilla!!

L.Ruby Meyer

Date: 8/13/2012 7:45:00 PM

INK, glad you commented on one of mine as it led me to your page, this is a poem I read more than once to absorb its meaning, and I mean that in the best of ways. Very moving. X Peace, Ruby

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM

No problem Ruby..I'm glad that you shared with me!!!

Carma Sanderson

Date: 8/13/2012 12:19:00 AM

me too..... drowing hard....

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/17/2012 9:50:00 AM

Lol..That's good news Carma..Congrats

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/8/2012 2:28:00 PM

Nice write. i like how you wrote it - JH

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/9/2012 8:48:00 PM

Thank you J.H!!!

Maxeen Dennis

Date: 8/7/2012 9:55:00 PM

I truely like how you express your love. And the words use to describe it. Awesome!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM

Thank you dearly Maxeen!!

Richard Palmer

Date: 8/7/2012 10:47:00 AM

great write PG Ink,love the style,love the flow,love the words

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM

Thank you Richard always!!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/6/2012 7:36:00 PM

You just described my life with Rosanna. Beautiful piece my poet brother. MJF

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/9/2012 8:46:00 PM

Oh wow..thanks a lot Michael!

Len Gasun

Date: 8/5/2012 9:12:00 AM

Nice write, Page. It makes me in love again while reading it. Thanks for sharing and wish you luck in all your endeavors.

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/9/2012 8:44:00 PM

Thank you dearly Leonora!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2012 9:26:00 PM

mmmmm... i love the image of tasting the morning... wow... this poem is one of your best ones yet... I love everything about it.. it is so dreamy and captivating. Last night I had a love revelation. I'm actually missing the feeling of falling and drowning in love... Hmmmm... hmmm..right back at you twice... Guess what I'm eating.. and I thought of~~~~~~~~~~~ ...xox~pd

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 8:00:00 AM

Lmao...I have no clue..Thank you for sharing with me Pd..always a pleasure from the Destroyer!!! :)

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/4/2012 7:58:00 PM

Wow...what a great write!!!! You must have a lot of arsenal and inspirtation in that wonderful and creative mind of yours. It definitely shows. This poem has me falling into the same sea of love :-) Keep writing!!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:57:00 AM

Love your comment!!! Always good to hear from you Doreen...that's one thing I try to do is to be creative...though it doesn't flow like your words..Huggs!!! And thank you dearly!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/4/2012 11:16:00 AM

you got more,pace??... looking forward!..:) huggs

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:55:00 AM

Yes madam..I will be posting soon! :)

Joy Wellington

Date: 8/3/2012 5:37:00 PM

Ooh, ooh oooh! My, my...just love the way your thoughts are drifting away..lovely form G INK. Thanks for stopping by me to read and leave a comment. One love. Joy Wells

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:54:00 AM

Love your comment..:) thanks for stopping by..enjoyed your last poem I read!!!

Joseph May

Date: 8/3/2012 11:19:00 AM

very nice write G...thanks for stopping by...Joseph

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM

Thanks a lot Joseph!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2012 8:18:00 AM

i can't breathe.. need oxygen here!... just breathless!!... hugggs, pace!

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM

Always a pleasure Nette..truly..Huggs!!!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 8/3/2012 8:12:00 AM

Wonder verse and form! Love both! C.Alvez

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:45:00 AM

Thank you dearly Cynthia!!! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/3/2012 5:32:00 AM

Love that crystallized foam and this write of your Pace, enjoyed this afternoon :) Wilma

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:44:00 AM

Thank you Wilma!!! Always grateful for you to stop by!!

Bertha Davis

Date: 8/2/2012 8:55:00 PM

Simply Fantastic!! I marvel at your talent and skill. XOXO

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:43:00 AM

Thank you Bertha...love your support!!! Hugs!!! :)

David Williams

Date: 8/2/2012 4:02:00 PM

Pace, I think this is just fabulous, love the format as well, but most of all I love it when people use either thou, thy, thine, in modern poetry it just brings that little touch of flair.. well done...David

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:41:00 AM

Thanks David...always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2012 2:49:00 PM

A poen that anyone can fall in love....so sweet and beautiful Pace,G - // Anne-Lise

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 8/5/2012 7:39:00 AM

Thanks Anne always my dear!!!