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Drowning

Quite suffocated, chugging a salty water. Drowned to shout for help.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/24/2015 12:35:00 AM
Very sharp image, Lei. Loved it. Btw, senryu, like haiku, does not capitalize nor use punctuation marks. PS. How've you been kabayan? Sorry for being remiss, busier these days except weekends.
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