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Drowning

Icy darkness tightens its embrace. Flailing, thrashing, clawing, waning; implacable liquid death threatens to overwhelm. Grasped by unseen hands; propelled upwards. Surface breached! Sweet, sweet air!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/1/2017 3:33:00 AM
Good Morning John. I turned to this entry at random. How very true. Your words are very expressive. Your Nonet is in true form. There is so much to be said for this state of mind. I like how you turned darkness to light. Well done. Enjoy the morning.
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John Michaels
Date: 6/2/2017 4:21:00 AM
Thank you Lisa - wow, this was an old one, but glad it still resonated with you! Regards, John.
Date: 6/1/2014 3:28:00 PM
Excellent imagery - great write!
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John Michaels
Date: 6/5/2014 4:22:00 AM
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!!

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