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Below is the poem entitled DROWNING which was written by poet Dawn mclaughlin. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Drowning sinking breathless 
chasing that dream 
leaping fast forward
 catching the air 
inhale that happiness
 exhale much negative
 enjoy the journey
 worth the wait
 in the end.

Copyright © Dawn mclaughlin

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  1. Date: 8/3/2012 12:28:00 PM
    A race through space and time... wonderful... Terry

  1. Date: 7/31/2012 8:28:00 AM
    ‡ The Journey Yesss, Sweet Beautiful Dawnie * I Love Your Photo, You Truly Are Quite Beautiful, Wow * 'Drowning Sinking Breathless;' Yeap, That's It & Thank You For Your Tender Beauty's Lovely Visit; Breathless * My Luv, Rachel ‡

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 6:47:00 AM
    Very very Nice Dawn.... hugs Michael

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 7:26:00 PM
    In living we are drowning. what a cool concept!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 2:45:00 PM
    worthwhile journeys are always fulfilling,great write Dawn

    mclaughlin Avatar Dawn mclaughlin
    Date: 7/28/2012 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard x