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Drowning

Ice cold Ripped thru my soul Going under for the third time A thousand eyes staring down Gasping for air Memories dying Almost see the light Pushing hard to the surface Muffled sounds Voicing shouting Almost there Outstretched arms grabbing hold Still alive

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Date: 1/16/2023 2:52:00 PM
ohhh, you can really feel it. WELL done!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 1/16/2023 8:04:00 PM
I have gone down 3 times You never forget this feeling
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Richard Ferry
Date: 1/16/2023 7:56:00 PM
Thanks

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