Drowning- For Contest

My head is spinning drowning in purple passion perhaps I can fly… 2/24/16

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Date: 2/29/2016 3:01:00 PM

I got carried away with this one, Barb. Sounds like you did too. Love, daver

Daver Austin
Date: 3/2/2016 10:52:00 AM

I am such a lover of the short form. Your one-liner is superb and should win most any contest. Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/2/2016 10:37:00 AM

Glad you liked it...apparently the judge didn't...so glad to hear from you. Barbara

Date: 2/29/2016 1:56:00 PM

Well done Barbara... a splendid MONOKU with just the right number of syllables! Best wishes, Keith

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/2/2016 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Keith, Nice of you to stop by.Hope all is well. BG

Date: 2/27/2016 3:04:00 PM

The feelings you have expressed are awesome in this beautiful entry Barbara. I am sure it will do great. I loved it! #7

Date: 2/25/2016 8:11:00 PM

wow, I love how you did your take on that picture. One of my favorites!

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 3/2/2016 10:39:00 AM

Wish you were the judge! Haha. A big N/A..BG

Date: 2/24/2016 1:44:00 PM

Purple a heavenly color...enjoyed it...god bless...^WW^