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Drowned In Your Fragrance

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1296 Premiere Poetry contest

Eigth Place

Sponsor: Brian Strand

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"From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" By Rumi Drowned in delicate perfume of the gorgeous bouquet, Glistening moon floating in sea of stars, you I see, Smell your scent in ambrosial Chrysanthemum How can I not be astounded with your beauty! Found you dancing joyfully in a sublime garden, I knew you were my Princess, like a butterfly You left the oasis, but the alluring scent stayed, I became a traveller in the world wandering by. Walked tirelessly hundreds and thousands miles for you, Crossing vast dales and tall soaring mountains far, Your fragrance brought me back to harmony of life , How did I not know where my beloved were!

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Jcb Brul

Date: 9/6/2022 2:40:00 PM

Congratulations Mala. So beautiful and passionate!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/6/2022 4:36:00 PM

Thanks, Dear JCB. Appreciate your inspiring comment.

Jcb Brul

Date: 9/6/2022 2:39:00 PM

Congratulations Mala. So beautiful and passionate!

Constance La France

Date: 8/17/2022 2:03:00 PM

Mala, beautiful and congratulations on your in the contests, blessings ~Constance

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2022 5:14:00 PM

Thank you, Constance. You inspire me.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/15/2022 11:37:00 AM

scent in ambrosial Chrysanthemum - Congratulations, Malabika!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2022 5:14:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Your presence and comments are delightful!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/14/2022 2:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A Lovely write. I can smell the perfume. Have a great/blessed~~day/week......................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2022 5:13:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I look forward to your inspiring comments.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/12/2022 10:02:00 PM

Rumi inspired this romantic journey you took us on Mala. Isn’t is marvelous that memories from our senses can bring the special time back to us? Very lovely Mala. Congratulations on your deserving First Place win. Blessings xxoo

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/17/2022 4:57:00 AM

Dearest Connie, I feel in cloud nine whenever I read your comments. Poetry is meaningful only when it connects with its readers. I have a feeling that both of us are very romantic! fragrance, aroma, scent - bring amazing memories back the way nothing else can. Thank you for congratulating me - I always look forward to your lovely words. Hope you are doing very very well. Hugs and blessings, My Friend ~ Mala

Michael Tor

Date: 7/24/2022 7:26:00 PM

Mala your words take us on a beautiful Journey of love through a trail of Fragrance that is given by your beloved no matter the distance you will meet and join together. Beautifully written my Dear and If I was judging this would be at the top of my list of Winners. Regardless Congratulations for a great effort shown here in this lovely writing. God bless you my Dear and keep writing, because we love what you put into words.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/26/2022 7:12:00 AM

Dear Michael, I feel so humbled with your inspiring comments. I can't believe you read three of my poems! You made my day, Michael, I am truly honoured. I am sure I will be thrilled to read your poems - sounds like we both are quite passionate. Best wishes, Dear Friend.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/24/2022 7:24:00 AM

I definitely drowned in the fragrant beauty of this excellent offering, Mala! Rumi lit a spark, but you, dear friend, turned that into an ardent flame! (a fav for me!) ~ Warm regards // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/26/2022 7:13:00 AM

Dear Paul, what a lovely compliment from you! Your Fave! So honoured!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/22/2022 3:32:00 PM

Loved the imagery, Mala, good entry for this contest. Good luck my friend. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 7/21/2022 8:41:00 PM

This poem sounds like stories of the Arabian Nights and it breathes out the perfume of Arabia ! Lovely entry for the contest ! All the Best, Mala !

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/22/2022 9:54:00 AM

Dear Valsa, How can I thank you enough for reading my humble poems, and leaving such glorious comments! Your comments truly bring tears to my eyes! I feel a connection with you and your poems. I am fortunate to have such a support! Love ~ Mala

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2022 9:01:00 AM

and to MY faves!!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/21/2022 9:29:00 AM

Ohhhh…that is so kind of you, Dear Andrea. I feel so honoured!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2022 9:00:00 AM

Ahhh, this is gorgeous, Mala!! So sweetly scented.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/21/2022 9:28:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Poet. I am so delighted that you liked it!