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Drops of Water

I See in a drop of water the universe,and how everything is contained.like life in a bubble.we have no control we can't leave on our own so we struggle everyday and in that struggle we pray for life.will a power take us over.we do not know will our World come crashing down will someone not save us ,we do not know it's here it's gone and all we can do is keep on going it's very hard we take a chance everyday we live in a world with and end .are we scared but we can't run away we have to stay and watch our bubble float away.we have no control is this our world is this the end or just the beginning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/4/2015 3:38:00 PM
- Well written, Elizabeth ....... interesting questions at the end ..... who knows (?) - I wish you a peaceful and great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2015 6:32:00 PM
The Speed Of Faith Is So Fast....That It Provides Life That Will Forever Last....but it takes hard work that really isn't as it seems....I mean, if they said everyone kill yourself, how many would do such a thing....very thought provoking Elizabeth....;)
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Date: 12/1/2015 6:37:00 AM
A deep and thought-provoking piece of prose, Elizabeth - Nicely penned! My best regards! :) john
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