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Drops of Crimson

All alone, you're cringing in fear, staring at the cold edge of steel. For beyond the fringes of hope, pain is the only thing you feel. Sanity decides what's real as inhibitions start to fade. And anticipating relief, depression empowers the blade. Cutting releases pent-up hurt, caught in an emotional web. And the physical pain allows rising anxieties to ebb. With each pounding beat of your heart, crimson starts flowing from your vein. Yet your pulse begins to throb less, for each cut numbs your mental pain. Your soul drowns in a scarlet pool, coalescing within your heart. And yet, you feel alive inside, although it's tearing you apart.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2018 10:24:00 PM
Love the way you end this poem: "And yet I feel alive inside although it’s tearing me apart"
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/13/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 9/13/2015 12:26:00 PM
Emile this is an excellent write. Wow, Cutting releases my spirit trapped in an emotional web. For the physical pain allows rising anxieties to ebb. These lines are incredible. Love them. They are prized. Great thoughts expressed. Wonderful write.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/13/2015 4:16:00 PM
Thanks Michael, I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 9/10/2015 3:18:00 PM
love this pretty scary write, my friend - a sure winner
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2015 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 9/10/2015 6:05:00 AM
oh my that really hurts.. a mortal sin and really tragic... I like the last two lines, powerful!!! thought provoking~Olive Eloisa =')
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Olive, as always I appreciate your visits. Emile.
Date: 9/10/2015 1:06:00 AM
this self-inflicting pain is so terrible, emile.. a compelling write on emotional angst that lies within.. wow and huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/10/2015 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Nette, as always I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/9/2015 5:41:00 PM
A very good, yikes - deep write, I enjoyed reading it ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/9/2015 6:05:00 PM
Thanks CayCay, I appreciate your visits. Emile.

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