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Droplets of Heaven

OLD POEM: GRAY SKY FALLS (SIJO) Paralyzed sunshine of the day, gray kissed skyscrapers in faint Blurry dance stuck in the air as the dew pervades some occlusions Day sketched gloom in beauty behind the droplets of breezy nimbus NEW POEM: Thy painter of sky smiled from altitudes The angels flew, danced amid the wet clouds Coloring mist, dust of beatitude Heaven's gate roared, the lightning showed some proud The veil of universe lurks from behind The shades crawl slow, camouflaged by the dark Droplets pervade the odor of sweet mind Like the smell of a wet land, the yearn park Breezes whistle through the aisles of droplets Caressing the skin while sky sheds its tears Gaze to the stunning gloom in violets The sparks steal some moments, shines with no fears Flood recede and leaves caught the rest of rain As my heart fades from melancholy, drained **************************************************************** 4th position Metamorph Sponsor Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 5/1/2013 6:01:00 PM
Yanny, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 5/16/2013 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Linda :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/29/2013 2:03:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/29/2013 11:06:00 PM
Thank you Sara glad to have your comment here :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny
Date: 4/28/2013 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Excellent piece ~A.O
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/28/2013 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Abdul :D glad to have your second visit :D wishing you a wonderful day :) hug, yanny
Date: 4/25/2013 4:37:00 PM
Way to go Yanny, excellent win! I enjoyed reading again.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/25/2013 6:35:00 PM
Thank you Rick, always pleasure to have you here :D wishing you a wonderful day, hug, yanny
Date: 4/25/2013 3:43:00 PM
I loved both of these, to me they are equally good! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/25/2013 6:34:00 PM
Thank you Debbie your contest is really challenging and inspired me a lot :) wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Date: 4/25/2013 10:12:00 AM
Many congratulations Yanny luv , a well deserved win xx
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/25/2013 6:33:00 PM
Thank you Mandy :D wishing you a wonderful day there :) hug, yanny
Date: 4/17/2013 8:48:00 AM
This is really beautiful my friend Yanny... Good luck in the contest.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 4/25/2013 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Abdul :D
Date: 3/28/2013 12:56:00 PM
- You have written it very beautifully Yanny!!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/30/2013 11:32:00 AM
Thank you Anne :D your words really uplifting, you are absolutely made my day Anne :D hug,yanny
Date: 3/28/2013 7:54:00 AM
Stunning! Old and new in perfectness of harmony. Sweet dreams Yanny.
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Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 3/28/2013 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Rick, this is my first attempt in sonnet and it's a pleasure to see such an uplifting comment by you in my evening :D wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny

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