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Droplets

Droplets falling down running, splashing as they fall in diamond prism written 09/02/2013 contest Perfect Haiku 2

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Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2015 10:07:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/28/2015 6:50:00 AM

ty Joseph hugs

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/26/2015 10:21:00 AM

Oh, this one's just pretty perfect! Loved it Shadow. Congrats!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/28/2015 6:49:00 AM

ty Kim hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/25/2015 9:24:00 PM

wow, how did I miss this one. I really like the imagery. Congrats, dearie. If I don't get on here next week, I will be back soon to see more of your poetry.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2015 2:12:00 AM

It is in my new book Andrea you go and have a great time and do not worry about soup it will still be here lol hugs

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/25/2015 7:07:00 PM

Love the imagery of a diamond prism in this lovely winning entry Shadow! Congratulations on your high placement with this beauty!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/26/2015 2:04:00 AM

ty Connie hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 6/25/2015 5:10:00 PM

Lovely imagery and fascinating diamond prism! Congratulations on a most lovely win. // paul

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 5:44:00 PM

ty Paul hugs

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/25/2015 11:42:00 AM

lovely haiku, very effective metaphor! Janice

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 5:44:00 PM

ty Janice hugs

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2015 10:19:00 AM

Honed from the sun !!! Love this one so much, Shadow !! Congratulations !!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 10:52:00 AM

ty Carrie hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/25/2015 7:40:00 AM

Lovely, I see we were both in a mood for splashing. Congratulations.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 10:51:00 AM

ty Rick indeed we were hugs

Darlene Gifford

Date: 6/25/2015 6:20:00 AM

Congrats, Shadow, on your high winning haiku. I enjoyed your poem. ~~Darlene

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 10:50:00 AM

ty Darlene hugs

Skat A

Date: 6/25/2015 1:25:00 AM

Shadow... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/25/2015 2:46:00 AM

ty very much Skat hugs

Seren Roberts

Date: 9/3/2013 10:17:00 AM

Loved it Shadow, a few words said it all...Seren

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:51:00 PM

hi and Ty Seren I do love Haiku's. Very happy you enjoyed

Poet Tacito

Date: 9/2/2013 5:20:00 PM

This was awesome! I love how you laid this out! Absorb the raindrops.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 5:24:00 PM

hi Drake rain the cleanser glad you like it ty for your time reading Shadow x smile

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 9/2/2013 5:12:00 PM

Very nice imagery! Laura :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/2/2013 5:25:00 PM

so kind of you Laura ty Shadow x smile