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Drop Your Music Into My Soul

Step into my silence, hear my tune drop your music into my soul carry parts of me not my whole absorbed Self would fail to your core attune. To your magic spell I’m not immune as with your songs I long to stroll Step into my silence, hear my tune drop your music into my soul. magic beyond a romantic croon a drift over which no control moments of bliss in words we stole entranced I dissolve in a swoon Step into my silence, hear my tune drop your music into my soul. (The rondel supreme, a French poetic form 14-line poem, Rhyme scheme : ABba/abAB/abbaAB)

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Anil Deo

Date: 1/6/2022 10:50:00 PM

I love it, Besma. I thank you for reminding contenders: do not expect my all! I would like U to opine on my newest dance poem, "Dance of Genesis." Thanks, salaam & shalom - shalom. Anil Deo

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 1/8/2022 4:18:00 AM

That's my pleasure, Anil! Always a great delight to read both your wonderful poetry and honouring feedback ! My deepest regards and blessings.

Valsa George

Date: 12/21/2021 8:12:00 PM

'moments of bliss in words we stole entranced I dissolve in a swoon'.... With what intensity of feelings your lines sieve through and settle in to the very core and bottom of my heart. Music especially music of the heart bewitches and enthralls. You have stepped into my silence and I feel your heavenly tune sending me to a real swoon, Besma!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/24/2021 1:44:00 PM

Drop your wonder into my heart and carry my soul to your height.. the music of your elevating words delights and enraptures my very soul! So much obliged to you for so wonderful a poetry on my humble words! Always an immense pleasure reading your amazing poetry and uplifting feedbacks, dear friend Valsa.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/1/2021 2:49:00 PM

You my good friend amaze me with the depths and the poetic insight of your wonderful creations. All verses are great but this stanza slays it! "" magic beyond a romantic croon a drift over which no control moments of bliss in words we stole entranced I dissolve in a swoon Step into my silence, hear my tune drop your music into my soul."" A fav- another gem... God bless..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 12/2/2021 12:48:00 PM

A deep joy, a sweet feeling of being appreciated by you Robert.. thank you so much for your wonderful words.. for your humility quoting my humble lines and words.. so much blessed and deeply humbled and grateful to you.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Anil Deo

Date: 11/22/2021 7:57:00 PM

a superb write, Besma. Music, ah .... I wrote one yesterday about "rain music" but Music is the soul of living things everywhere. Salaams, shalom-shalom. anil

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/24/2021 8:04:00 AM

Music, a universal language Humanity relates to and relishes in.. Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, Anil.. always a great pleasure reading such a rewarding response! My deepest regards and blessings.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/18/2021 6:41:00 AM

Hello Besma, that's a wonderful poem. Step into my silence, hear my tune. Wow... Loved your poem. Blessings

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/20/2021 6:50:00 AM

So wonderful and heart warming is your response to my humble words! Thank you so much sweet friend and poetess, Paghunda for your great support and beauty! My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Valsa George

Date: 11/9/2021 6:40:00 PM

Such a soothing song that seeps into the spirit !Solitude and silence are the most favourable conditions to be in communion with the Lord. It is bliss reading this poem. Thanks a lot Besma for sharing this with us.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 11/14/2021 9:51:00 AM

Blessed to have you, dear Valsa, a poetess of beauty and sensitivity who drops her nectar to enrich and beautify my word and soul.. thank you so much for your generosity and true feelings. My deepest regards and blessings.

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/24/2021 12:25:00 AM

Wow, wonderful poetry, Besma, So hard to resist your invitation.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/28/2021 11:24:00 AM

Honoured and elated to have you on my path of poetry reading and appreciating my humble words.. thank you so much, Harry for your wonderful and rewarding feedback! My deepest regards and blessings.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/21/2021 9:20:00 AM

"Step into my silence, hear my tune drop your music into my soul" - Oh, how charming beautiful these two lines are! Dear Besma, your poem is soothing, lyrical, gorgeous! Really enjoyed reading all the lovely lines - I am impressed by the French form - so creative! Love and blessings ~ Mala

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/21/2021 3:16:00 PM

A deep joy into my heart while reading your wonderful feedback on my humble words! Thank you so much, dear Malabika for being here honouring my poetry.. You are of kindness and beauty.. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/20/2021 10:20:00 AM

A very beautiful poem! Great Work!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/20/2021 2:51:00 PM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit and appreciation, Christuraj.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/18/2021 4:07:00 AM

Hi Besma, my long and lasting friend, as always a poem exquisitely executed with heartfelt precision and soulful creativity. Only you could give these words a soul - the last two in your last stanza - your poems I always, before even reading them know, they will be par excellence. Hugs and blessings dear Besma, Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2021 5:08:00 PM

Dearest friend and soul sister Jenny, every single word you drop is a huge joy into my heart. Your feedback radiates with love, kindness and generosity.. what a wonderful soul you are! I cherish all your touching words into my heart. Thank you so much for being you! My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/17/2021 6:39:00 AM

The piece's tone and rhythms were superb. The message, which is true, says, "Enter my silence to hear my song." Besma, your approach to your truthful readers is truly admirable. You have a wonderful English language skills and you portray yourself poetically and exquisitely.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2021 4:59:00 PM

I salute your kindness and remarkable humility, Lassad.. I can't thank you enough for so touching a compliment and appreciation for what my mind and heart humbly conceive.. Always learning from all those whose light is bright.. Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Silent One

Date: 10/16/2021 3:47:00 PM

You have such a wonderful way with words, expressing them so poetically, does not matter what form it is... it is always an enjoyable read..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2021 4:53:00 PM

So rewarding is your response to my humble poetry, Silent One.. I hold dear such an elating appreciation.. always a pleasure receiving your support. Thank you so much! My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/16/2021 6:32:00 AM

A lovely rhythm to your write, Besma. Enjoyed the tone and flow. And a message that resonates: Step into my silence, hear my tune --drop your music into my soul.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2021 4:27:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed the music into my humble poetry and so much pleased reading your uplifting and encouraging response.. Thank you so much, dear Vijay for your great support and appreciation.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2021 10:48:00 PM

A symphony of rhymes concocted like music. Indeed a supreme rondel that lifts the heart with its imagery. Well done my friend. Blessings.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 10/19/2021 4:21:00 PM

The great pleasure is mine having you, an insightful and highly talented poet reading and appreciating my humble words.. Thank you so much, Victor! My deepest regards and blessings.