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Drink Up Hummingbird

Hummingbird come sit upon my feeder Drink your fill of red nectar made by man Flowers come and go - this comes from Walmart Take your time to drink as much as you can They say you are flying to Mexico That is farther than I have ever been I'll do my part to help along the way Enjoy yourself with these meals made by men Maybe I will see you come next Winter You can tell me then all about your trip Did you find yourself a humming lady Did you cheat and sit down upon a ship I see you're getting restless to depart I know you've got a long, long way to go Bon voyage as they say in the city If you make it, drop me a line or so Judged 10/26/20 Rated: N/A Contest: Completely Your Choice (33) Sponsor : Brian Strand This contest: Hm's and Na's October 2020 Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 11/8/2020 5:20:00 AM
Larry, congratulations on your win in my HM's and NA's October 2020 Challenge with this excellent poem _Constance
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Date: 11/6/2020 7:46:00 PM
Larry, I love hummingbirds and I love the wonderful spirit of your poem. I keep my hummie feeders filled all spring and summer till they depart in mid September. I hate to see them leave. I wish them safe travels, as well, and wait for their return. Such a beautiful poem. Congratulations for your fine win in Constance's contest.. ~Susan
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Kind words that are very welcome! We keep feeders all season, too.
Date: 10/27/2020 5:19:00 PM
Wonderful conversation with a favorite bird of mine.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/27/2020 5:24:00 PM
Thanks, Caren...Mine too
Date: 10/26/2020 10:10:00 AM
Hello Larry Bradfield,yes the humming birds do have a long way to travel. They are beautiful small birds. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2020 3:20:00 PM
Hello Larry Bradfield, you are very welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 10/26/2020 10:24:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene

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