Drink

We shall not feel nor think We shall drink! Thought gave us headache Love gave us heartache It is priceless to be senseless Why should we think or feel? If we'd hide and conceal The thought of the mind and….. The longing of the heart We should better start Drinking! Yes! Drink and drink more What should we even be sober for? Anguish, disease or war? Please! Just let us pour Shall we heal our pain So Drink, drink and drink again! Till our dreams are fulfilled Or rather by the lover be felt! Drink, drink and drink to the core! Shall drinking wash and clean The memories of the past, of our…. Longed for queen Hope she may be told, she may know What we hold inside for her, but couldn’t show A sober tongue is chained, as you see So drink! Shall drinking set it free 7/11/2015

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Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/27/2015 6:14:00 AM

good pen Mohamed congrats on win hugs

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/29/2015 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for the placement :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/27/2015 2:39:00 AM

Yet another exquisite poetry and superb win Mohamed! Big congrats!

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/29/2015 8:24:00 PM

Thank you,Dr.Upma, so much :)

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2015 5:16:00 PM

'a sober tongue is chained' yet drunken words can cause so many issues and the problems will still there the next day - just a temporary release - will stick to my cuppa tea lol great write - my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/26/2015 6:37:00 PM

you have made a good point ,Jan, but i think some drunken words of love and expression are better than no words at all,but anyway it's still a matter of opinions and so, thank you,Jan, so much for your support stopping by :)

Skat A

Date: 7/26/2015 4:35:00 PM

Mohamed, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/26/2015 6:38:00 PM

Thank you,Skat, so much :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/14/2015 10:51:00 PM

Wow Mohamed, this is well, the first thought that comes to mind, so Hemingway, I salut your talent!

Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/15/2015 3:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Arthur, for stopping by and very happy you liked it :)