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Driftwood

stiff as a board lying in the wake of another dream an imprint of your body fading from my bed's white shore "when will you be back?" the soft breeze gone unanswered lost to the loneliness of the wind "i want you to come.." yet a sudden realization sucked breath from yearning's end although death was on your lips last night i will not forget what we had

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/3/2011 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Brandon. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:16:00 PM
Very memorable poem. Well done.
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:33:00 AM
My congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Brandon
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well written poetry being featured this week Brandon. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/27/2011 12:58:00 PM
WOW,! LOVE this!
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Date: 2/10/2011 4:23:00 PM
Enjoyed this one ver much..It has such good poetic qualities..Very descriptive and expressive work..Sara
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Date: 2/5/2011 3:28:00 PM
Very intriguing and full of suspense, Brandon
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