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Drifting Thoughts

What sonnets drip from pens and lonely lips, where from a heart a painful memory sighs, and lurks within a lyric's hidden scripts that float on melodies where silence cries. Tempestuous, its fickle echoes swell, much like the waves that sweep from sea to shore, and offer only seconds 'tween to dwell before the tides again upon me pour. Yet life, this life, must pass without regret, and I must not lament what might have been; the luffing trim of sail cannot forget that gentle winds will visit once again. It's there on summer shores they'll come a day - like sands await the tide...I'll wash away.

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Date: 9/26/2022 5:20:00 PM
Hi Craig, I've just met with your work and encountered a new image that interests me: the seconds 'tween the waves. Very nice metaphor! Elizabeth
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Date: 9/7/2022 12:55:00 PM
ah these words of yours lull me into dreams like the waves themselves..i'd never heard 'luffing' before, had to look it up, i always like learning a new word.:) i admire people who can write a good traditional sonnet, i have to stick to contemporary ones as - shhh - i can't write meter to save my life lol
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/7/2022 1:12:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte - you prove that poetry is much more than meter!
Date: 9/6/2022 7:22:00 PM
Indeed, we are vapor...must make the best of time. Thanks, Mr. Cornish.
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/7/2022 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Arlo
Date: 9/6/2022 5:00:00 PM
Beautiful! Title and ending line so well suited and I agree with Gary re the luffing sail… esp love the second and third stanzas :)
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Date: 9/6/2022 12:30:00 PM
This is truly excellent Craig. I wanted to avoid a cliche like 'flow' when describing your sonnet..but it does just that.. and beautifully. I was particularly taken by the lines: "the luffing trim of sail cannot forget that gentle winds will visit once again." I can tell that so much thought and time has gone into this as it shows. Cheers - Gary
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/7/2022 1:11:00 PM
Very kind Gary, thank you
Date: 9/6/2022 11:30:00 AM
Poems, especially sonnets about life are worth the read, there's always a nugget of wisdom to find
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/7/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Frederic
Date: 9/6/2022 7:14:00 AM
This is very well penned, Craig. Enjoyed very much
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Craig Cornish
Date: 9/7/2022 1:10:00 PM
Thank you Jeff

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