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Drifting Plankton

I was thinking of you touching my belly in one moment in time, and me kissing your shoulder in another. I was thinking of talk and whiskey, the sound of bass and shyness. I have no wishes. I was just thinking how it could be if the world stayed round but got so much smaller, for only one room to be, for you and me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/6/2013 9:44:00 PM
Mirela, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA
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Mirela Simic
Date: 3/13/2014 9:28:00 AM
thanks : ) sorry for not answering so long, I wasn't online
Date: 4/6/2013 10:37:00 AM
I love the imagery here.
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Mirela Simic
Date: 3/13/2014 9:28:00 AM
: ) thank you
Date: 4/5/2013 4:40:00 AM
excellent focus; beautiful imagery. you've woven a compelling tapestry. thank you
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Date: 3/13/2014 9:29:00 AM
no, thank you :))

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