Drifting Away On a Cloud

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Unrhymed tercets 3 groups to give a cloud

Over the mountains Faraway winds are howling to a dream sparkling inside a color bow Diamond tipped golden arrow piercing your sunlight rises only love Blinds even the clearest of eyes with dew Ear to ear a voice echoes into the horizons dawning night under a blanket of stars I kiss you my Venus until the moon smiles

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Red Fiery

Date: 5/22/2016 8:23:00 PM

kiss you my Venus until the moon smiles .......romantically and emotionally powerful...a fav straightaway my co-writer !!! I wish you a pleasant and creative week~ Cheers ~Red

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/22/2016 8:55:00 AM

- Beautiful poem, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/21/2016 7:59:00 PM

Well done Liam...

Sonia Walker

Date: 5/21/2016 7:51:00 PM

Liam, lovely imagery within your poem. Clouds seem to do this to us. All the best, Sonia.

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/21/2016 7:07:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^