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Drifting - End Line Word Contest

The days grow short as if to welcome…….. Autumn Colored days, a feast of red and golden.....Leaves From tired branches they drop and slowly...Drift Tenderly tossed by winds they dance………..Across The garden path and rustle beneath…………My Feet. Summer gone, and with it your ……..Broken Promises. Left now with just an empty…… Heart

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Date: 9/26/2015 4:36:00 PM
You have done this end line form beautifully and cleverly, Barbara! I love it! I can foresee a sure winner:) // paul
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Date: 9/25/2015 9:37:00 AM
Very well put with easy flow rhythm and impeccable imagery. Emile.
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Date: 9/23/2015 9:40:00 PM
Barbara this is so sad and special. Tying in Autumn with a broken heart. I really love what you did here. Good luck!
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/23/2015 10:08:00 PM
thank you so much Michael...appreciate your stopping by.Barbara

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