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Drifter

Silence (sadness) interrupted by my thoughts of him (my drifter) his kiss so soft and sweet (like icing on a cake) eyes dancing (shining)by candlelight colors of crimson (passion) and blue (serenity) surrounding us traveling and drifting (in his arms) to unexplored (familiar) places knowing (hoping) that forever (this moment) we are one praying for a lifetime (eternity) of waking to his touch the love of my drifter (a wonderful memory) forever Copyright © 2009 Lena “Lolita” Townsend

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Date: 5/19/2009 6:40:00 AM
What a fine example of infatuation Lolita ! I am the die hard romantic,..you stole mine heart ! Great poetry ! james
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:43:00 PM
Aww, so beautiful to cherish the incredible and everlasting memories you have. A capture here of pure lovers bliss. A rare connection. So swept away in this wonderful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 3:26:00 PM
i'm thinking of something a little more permanent. jhl
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Date: 5/18/2009 7:56:00 AM
Like the different styles in this one Lolita.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 5/18/2009 7:41:00 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments.Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:53:00 AM
This one sounds like a movie I've seen, such a love, rather sad, a wonderful memory. ~ good writing, Lena!~Carrie
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Date: 5/18/2009 4:34:00 AM
This is beautiful my friend..I love the memory in the piece and love and passion that flows...good work.
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Date: 5/18/2009 4:25:00 AM
understanding increased w/blog....very moving..... with (italics) playing a role of echo-reflection..... you have beautiful memories, Lena, with a poetic ability to allow us to share!!! thanks! and thank you for kind comments, Jim
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