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Drift Wood

Compare thee to drift wood Floating bobbing endless sea Years of soaking choking salt Moon light and sun stroke Waiting years for storm to brew Bring me drifting to you Landing gentle on your golden sand You pick me up and hold my hand

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/12/2018 8:59:00 PM

Awesome write, saving to favs :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 4/13/2018 11:33:00 AM

Hi Debbie , thank you my friend::))))Hugs~~~~Niall

Akkina Downing

Date: 3/16/2018 6:13:00 PM

I read this on FB 2x and here again and still love it. It so beautiful my awesome friend! Super hugs :) :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/16/2018 8:19:00 PM

Hi Akkina , thank you for comment , happy weekend to you my friend::))) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2018 12:21:00 PM

- A great poem, Niall ... love the end :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/14/2018 5:59:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise , yes the last lines are real sweet and romantic ,,,thank you my friend :::))) hugs

Amy Sell

Date: 3/14/2018 7:55:00 AM

I'm not a romantic person, but I did like this analogy a lot. It is recognizable, but not too common.

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/14/2018 12:18:00 PM

Hi Amy , you don;t know what your missing ::))) lol,, thank you for your lovely comment my friend ::))) hugs

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/13/2018 7:35:00 PM

Your romantic tide is riding high, Niall, with this most tender and beautiful poem. Completely captivating with its endearing imagery and content. Love it! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/14/2018 2:18:00 AM

Hi Susan , from the heart my friend , thank you for comment ::))) hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2018 5:46:00 PM

aww such a tender poem Niall:-) hugs Jan xx

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/13/2018 5:56:00 PM

Hi Jan, my romantic tide is coming in ::))) Hugs , Niall

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/13/2018 5:07:00 PM

Very clever, Niall. She is the driftwood yet picks you up. Lovely imagery.

Niall Fulham
Date: 3/13/2018 5:09:00 PM

Hi Line , thank you for comment my friend ::))))) hugs :) niall