Dreamstrength: the Final Frontier

posthumous travels bending light.... spirits embrace sanguine souls rejoice

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 6:47:00 PM

Just the thought of the spirits embracing in heaven's light brings a smile to my face. Very clever wording -- just nine words and you evoke a joyful image. Jim, your work never lets us down. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2009 11:08:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this amazing poem with us James. Love, Carol

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/8/2009 10:07:00 AM

My dreams are warped, but seem to be whats to come... Man, because I run into deja-vu constantly..... Good write Friend....:JP]

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/8/2009 5:30:00 AM

Hi Jim, This wonderful poem is comforting and provides peacefulness upon the face of light. Smile! God bless you. Love, Dane

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 10/8/2009 12:57:00 AM

Fighting for your dream till the end James- We all do--good on you..nice write.

Donna Golden

Date: 10/7/2009 10:50:00 PM

Chilling, haunting, lovely piece! And just in time for Halloween! Bravo, Jim!

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/7/2009 9:43:00 PM

Excellent execution in this JMG, loved it...Raul

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/7/2009 9:02:00 PM

I Can see the strength in this dream...i love the embracing spirit..excellentwork Jim--Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 10/7/2009 8:11:00 PM

This is nice. I enjoyed reading it tonight. Marty