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Dreams Put On Hold

Fate met with life on a crossroad, they saw me looking both ways, hesitant to take any merging path; fear overcame me, numbing my senses, and frozen like Alaskan ice, I stood there. Fate asked life to put dreams on hold, but she protested with an astute reply, " He's old, a huge debt you owe him! " I waited while they battled with words; a rushing thought invaded me , " Go! " And I started running, not listening to them; I realized that fate is what we make of it. I remembered the card reader who suggested I wore a talisman for good luck, I ignored her. If in defeat I mourn, or in triumph I cheer... the voice that I heeded was a good omen. I have lived longer than any true or untrue friend; at their tombstones I stand and grieve their loss, perhaps The Higher Power added years to this life to recompense me for my patience and long wait.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/3/2016 3:30:00 AM
Andrew, Congratulations, on your awesome win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/29/2016 2:31:00 AM
Lovely poem n win Andrew.. big congrats!
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Date: 1/28/2016 11:31:00 PM
solid, pensive write, andrew.. congrats on your win and huggs!
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Date: 1/28/2016 1:24:00 PM
Andrew, a wonderful poem, congrats on your placement *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/27/2016 8:30:00 PM
I love reading poems like this, poems with a message. Well done, Andrew.
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:13:00 AM
a keen, intuitive look at life's reason for existence, andrew... superb!..huggs
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Date: 1/27/2016 11:00:00 AM
Very nice write, the ponderance of time and existence and I am glad you are still here to share with us all
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