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Dreams of a Superwoman

I flew through the mall Wore Superman’s cape and suit It was Christmas time With ease, my shopping complete The woman of steel prevailed For Michael Falotico’s Tanka me a Dream contest By Diane Locksley

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2011 1:19:00 PM

oh, wow, what a cute one this is. you superwoman, you!

James Fraser

Date: 3/5/2011 5:21:00 AM

Never get in the way of lady shopping, especially at the sales. My poem about San Andrés, is the San Andrés in the Canary Islands. It's near Tererife. Good luck in Michael's contest Diane....:)

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/20/2011 3:19:00 PM

oh wow! That was you, Diane?! Cool!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/19/2011 6:55:00 PM

Very crazy dream indeed !Enjoyed.Thanks for your inspiring words at my page.--kashinath

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/19/2011 11:51:00 AM

MJF, will like this I reckon Diane, he did ask for crazy ;) good luck for the contest superwoman :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/18/2011 10:47:00 AM

It takes superhuman strength to get all that shopping done, Diane. Best wishes for success in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 2/18/2011 9:25:00 AM

Oooo, bring this Superwoman to Scotland. Nice one Diane. Have a lovely weekend....:)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/18/2011 8:18:00 AM

what a jewel! i likey, diane! :) huggs, nette

Daver Austin

Date: 2/18/2011 7:44:00 AM

Congrats. Even Superwoman couldn't survive a mall crowd at Christmas time. Enjoyed mucho. Love, Dave

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2011 7:34:00 AM

Good one..I would have loved to have been super woman this past Christmas..Good luck in the contest with this sure winner that is very creative...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2011 5:17:00 AM

Yes, Diane, sometimes I wear the Superwoman cape, loved this dream~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2011 10:00:00 PM

AWEsome tanka writing, Diane. I wish you the best in this contest.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 2/17/2011 7:08:00 PM

Nice imagery and use of Superman's image and popularity. Beautifully written a very witty write my friend. My good wishes for your contest and thanks for your precious comments on When the Earth was in danger. Hope you would enjoy the remaining story as well. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Diane Locksley

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/17/2011 4:26:00 PM

yes, You can call Ram or dr. Ram. Thanks for your comment, Superwoman flying over the mall. High flight of imagination, Diane

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/17/2011 3:26:00 PM

You will be a bigger superwoman if you pay off all your charges before the next holiday season. Well written

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/17/2011 3:14:00 PM

Best of luck with this so true to life scenario, played time and again each year, Diane. At least we can take a breath for now : ) Michael will have a tough time as the Tankas all seemed truly well written. Hope you're doing fine. Always, Annalise