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Dreams In Her Eyes

She see's through daisies and succumbs to night things Her heart keeps on breathing for pleasure in the evenings She's wanting to see you at any time of day with eyes wide open Even when she see's through an ivory of daisies amidst within Her viewing embers are so well hidden, along with her knowledge Are her own makings with in this fine enclosure of foliage She's the epitome of a wonton beauty as you shall see Oh how she does love you, while smells and is so free She see's through daisies and succumbs to night things Her heart keeps on breathing for pleasure in the evenings. 04/03/15

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Gary Bateman

Date: 4/16/2016 10:58:00 AM

Hello Eden, What an excellent couplet!! I've written a number of couplets and heroic couplets and do enjoy them very much. A "7" here for sure and a definite "Favorite"!! Keep up the great writing!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Eden Barton
Date: 4/16/2016 1:58:00 PM

Thank you so very much Gary, a real pleasure to see your comment on this penned couplet of mine. I usually enjoy writing longer writes but thought I'd branch out and try some shorter forms. Take care and cheers to you also Gary.